Friday, July 27, 2012

blue haiku


Final cloud chorus
Faint echoes remote lightning
One foot in the grave


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photo: Flint Hills, Kansas
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posted by phil at 11:37 PM

4 Comments:

Blogger Vinay Leo R. said...

Sounds more like a storm in the hole ;)

Interesting haiku, this.

7/28/2012 2:12 AM  
Blogger Grace said...

That last line is a full of chilling thoughts ~Nice to meet you ~

7/28/2012 7:36 AM  
Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

i believe that last line describes every person, whether we wish to admit it or not.

My Forget-Me-Nots

7/28/2012 9:43 PM  
Blogger Marit said...

'Kinda blue' indeed, your haiku is somehow magical yet creepy... I don't know how to describe it exactly but I love it!

7/29/2012 6:20 AM  

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