shyness haiku
as natural as a fish
surfacing for air
posted by phil at 7:50 PM
Saturday, May 1, 2010
A Vagabond's Sketchbook
phil
wandering
39° 44' N
86° 17' W
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etched in stone...
- THIS is the city
- buoyancy
- shut up and kiss me
- curio shop sketch
- little church in the vale
- quote for bookworms
- doomed radio show, 1948
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- March came in...
- the after hours
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20 Comments:
OH, Oh, OH ~ perfect!
Dear Vagabond: This is absolutely true; I simply adore your "Shy Haiku". Very Zen. Are you saying you feel like "a fish out of water" in unfamiliar settings! Welcome to the club! Me too! Excellent poem! Love your style!
Terrific!
I love Haiku, especially when it is well done....
Well done, dear Vagabond,
Joanny
Oh you've described me! I always have that hesitation - what AM I doing here & what shall I do now? Perfect!
Smooth, Phil. Smooth as oil.
Ohhhh!
I see your eyes bulging and mouth open..... O2, thank you....
so nicely done...so much said in so few words. brilliant magpie!
VERY nicely done, Phil!
Sometimes stuff is just perfect! You caught a universal feeling..thanks!
A perfect haiku... so clever!
Christine
I'm a big haiku fan too. Nice one.
Excellent...
Pretending to be confident, sashaying like a fish, but inside gasping for air. Lovely.
Mmm, feels familiar. The fish in my pond seem excited when they jump, but they don't stay out long.
Sweet, soft haiku. Loved it.
such a few but powerful words...i love your mastery, your completeness with them!
handsome,
it goes straight to the point!
Best!
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