Friday, January 14, 2011

waiting for the subway

yearning for summer
girl upstairs, white blossom dress
cue the luscious breeze

12 Comments:

Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

Delicious.

1/14/2011 4:33 PM  
Anonymous tami said...

well said! "cue the luscious breeze!"

1/14/2011 8:32 PM  
Blogger rebecca said...

sultry
unabashed
wistfully
provocative.

you have cued my luscious breeze!

1/14/2011 9:37 PM  
Blogger Noelle Renee said...

I love this. It's so provocative, so wonderful, so "ratpack!" Romance from the past.
thank you,
Noelle

1/14/2011 10:53 PM  
Anonymous ms pie said...

7 years of itching all in one night.... marilyn she rock... joe mmm not so much...

1/14/2011 11:22 PM  
Blogger foxysue said...

Love your haiku Phil, I'm searching for shoes, my son's up-and-coming wedding in May, husband said "just google Marilyn Monroe shoes"!

Sue x

1/15/2011 3:44 AM  
Blogger Spadoman said...

The calm before one very famous storm. The haiku says everything.

Peace.

1/15/2011 6:10 AM  
Blogger Boonie S said...

Very glamorous.

Have a good weekend, Boonie

1/15/2011 6:45 AM  
Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Absolutely beautiful..

1/15/2011 12:14 PM  
Blogger phil said...


thanks for kind messages. :)

my alternate haiku:

a token of love
girl upstairs, white blossom dress
cue the luscious breeze

1/15/2011 1:43 PM  
Blogger Friko said...

are the girl and the luscious breeze keeping you awake?

A luscious haiku!

1/15/2011 5:34 PM  
Blogger somepinkflowers said...

how yummy these words
pushing my thoughts to a time
dress left on the floor...

1/15/2011 8:47 PM  

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