it's all yours, shorty
Oh, the ridiculousness of it all. To lose the business in a poker game. The shame seeps out of my pores as thick as water pours from a rat-clogged downspout. I give the fat little man the deed to my life up to now, exit by a color-drained alley, hiding my embarrassment with a dry umbrella like a neurotic movie star dodging flashbulbs sneaking out for a sack of donuts, and ride away on a stolen bike used only once by a humorless hair-bun widow carrying a little trembling dog in a wicker basket. Squeak squeak squeak.
Red Umbrella
~Christopher Shay
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12 Comments:
Good take on the picture. I love the -squeak squeak squeak- at the end.
I really like this. Great interpretation.
ha. great descriptions...nice use of sound too...it concretes it well...and i hope her name was not dorothy...smiles. nice mag.
Your words flow, beautifully!
Were they little chocolate donuts? Seriously good, Phil, as always. I had to read it out loud.
Creative, and really different, take on the prompt.
Clever Magpie - love it!
Anna :o]
VIVID!
;)
~Mimi
www.collagepirate.blogspot.com
I like how you brought the bike into the story too.
Good use of all the elements in the picture. Very pleasing Magpie.
This one had a touch of Noir to it... probably accentuated by the tone of the picture. Nice read!
Cheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
Ha ha! squeak squeak Great magpie-thank you.
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