Friday, June 29, 2012

covered bridges

Echoing passage
Green moss shuddered quietude
Carriage scented past

Across the bridge leads to
recuerda mi corazon,
exclusive home of
Haiku My Heart

Covered Bridge
~Bing photo search


Blogger Spadoman said...

You got me with that first line and held my thoughts throughout! I heard the echo that I have experienced when traversing such a bridge. I saw the mossy places in the shady spots and the scent of the timbers, not the carriages themselves, came to my mind. Wonderful overall.


6/30/2012 6:41 AM  
Blogger ds said...

Yes, and I could smell that past...beautifully wrought. Thank you.

6/30/2012 5:51 PM  
Blogger Irene Rafael said...

you captured another time with your words. i have traveled under covered bridges both literally and figuratively. there is a special quality to the sounds and smells.

7/05/2012 3:31 PM  

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