Sunday, March 24, 2013

shyness


Shyness death sentence
Polished looking glass pity
Jailbreak illusion


Not to be Reproduced (1937)
by René Magritte

12 Comments:

Blogger Jinksy said...

What a clever haiku - fits the image a treat...

3/25/2013 6:58 AM  
Blogger Helen said...

This is great, Phil!!

3/25/2013 12:24 PM  
Blogger Michael D. (Wryter) said...

Hmm. My interpretation is that that is one unforgiving mirror. Yep. Seems to me to be uneasy photo to haiku, but at least you attempted to somehow express it.

3/25/2013 4:00 PM  
Blogger Lyn said...

Pity indeed..can't look himself in the eye, poor chap! You did so well...

3/25/2013 4:58 PM  
Blogger Berowne said...

Quite innovative take...

3/25/2013 7:02 PM  
Blogger Karen S. said...

A clever thought!

3/26/2013 12:18 PM  
Blogger Sue said...

Great word choice in this excellent haiku.

=)

3/26/2013 12:42 PM  
Blogger ~T~ said...

Shyness is solitary confinement. Is introversion solitary freedom?

3/26/2013 1:03 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

Clever word choice. Impressive.

6/21/2014 2:47 AM  
Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

Nice, Phil...

6/21/2014 10:02 PM  
Blogger Cait O'Connor said...

Nice one.

6/22/2014 6:16 AM  
Blogger Freya Writes said...

Yes, a very clever haiku,'reflects' the mood of Magritte's painting.

6/22/2014 11:52 AM  

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