Sunday, August 18, 2013

chance


Corkscrewing in rhythmic waltz time
Or goggle-mach speed spearing white clouds
In lofty and gracious Amelia flight

Take the flip-coin chances of dank miners
Or saltatory fish gasping for air
Abandon safe poet chairs behind closed curtains

Swim offshore amongst the lithesome whale
Listen closely, gather their forsaken tales
Stroking away your own scorned love
photo by Elena Kalis

8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love it! So many gorgeous lines wonderful =)

8/19/2013 1:14 PM  
Blogger Lucy Westenra said...

Some beautifully complex imagery here.

8/20/2013 2:17 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Most excellent!

8/20/2013 5:02 PM  
Blogger Kathe W. said...

love this line:
Swim offshore amongst the lithesome whale Wow!

8/20/2013 5:55 PM  
Blogger Wayne said...

nicely done Phil

8/20/2013 11:54 PM  
Blogger phil said...

thank you, Friends.

This was a tough write.

8/21/2013 8:35 PM  
Blogger hyperCRYPTICal said...

Most excellent indeed!
Anna :o]

8/22/2013 8:51 AM  
Blogger ~T~ said...

Jump in, the water's fine!
The poetry, even finer.

8/28/2013 3:40 PM  

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