Saturday, April 2, 2011

rain


Tears of April wash
away! chilled sorrowful days
puddle stomping dance

7 Comments:

Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I can see the splishes and splashes of the puddle-stomping dance!

4/02/2011 12:58 PM  
Blogger Noelle Renee said...

Well I love the silhouetted kitten. I am rather partial to them. Yours looks rather curious with his head cocked just so. Wonderful haiku! I like the metaphor of tears and the puddle-stomping dance almost sounds like a native american celebration. Lovely.
Noelle

4/02/2011 8:07 PM  
Blogger My garden haven said...

I can see how stomping on puddles might hide the tears...I like the way your haiku makes me imagine more than you intend.
Rosie

4/03/2011 9:31 AM  
Blogger rebecca said...

beyond your window
i am the tears of april
forlorn tapping dance

dear phil,

forgive my very late arrival. haiku my heart began with beauty and turned on a dime with a severe fever keeping me in bed for days.
i am so weak but thought i would try and at least let a few more know why they have not heard from me.
thanks for your understanding and your most beautiful haiku.
i can relate to this longing cat...
watching life from the inside...out.

4/03/2011 11:07 AM  
Blogger Margaret Pangert said...

Hi Phil~ Amazing how spring can lift the mood: there we are stomping through mud puddles with the cat! The photo is beautiful: at once spontaneous and posed. Looking forward to light and happiness!

4/03/2011 10:28 PM  
Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful. You were reading my magpie mind.

4/04/2011 7:39 AM  
Blogger Margaret said...

Perfect! And I love the photo... I need to learn how to do a proper haiku...

4/06/2011 12:49 AM  

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