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"Sure, I remember, of course I do. We won't talk about the frequent weeping. Not even the frequent miles, apart. I held you, and we kissed as our feet were still floating. Frequently. We traversed like magnetic pins zig-zagging on a map in a sweaty police squad room. Like 'I've got a hunch, captain - Cordon off this area, men, along this route is where the next kissing incident will occur. Mark my word - I've been a policeman for twenty-three years. I know'. Right up to our parting from the bus station. I think they announced our kiss over the loud speaker, squawking like adults in a Charlie Brown special."
She smiled and looked down at her shoes.
"I don't hear so good anyway when you're kissing me", she said, her eyes gleaming.
On another walk, in a year when time once stopped around half past three, they stood in the middle of the block in front of a jewelry store shining with pudding-colored lights. The displays looked tasty, and she licked her lips. He saw this and then he kissed her. People walked by with hunched shoulders in the rain. No gumshoes need apply.
photograph by Robert Doisneau
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7 Comments:
I like the use of tense in this.. The monologues telling stories of a love story that maybe never will be fulfilled.. The simile of a squadroom was very creative
I love the line about not hearing so good, not when you're kissing me.
Delightful blend of wit humor and romance...
A delightful flash fiction! I wanted to know what happened next. <3
I love the fun and nostalgia in this.
very enjoyable- who can hear when being kissed?
Great combination of floating feet, deaf ears, and police procedural...
Merry Christmas!
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