Thursday, August 26, 2010

cottage haunt


Cottage beyond woods
Brittle clay pigeons swooping
Shooing cast iron deer

11 Comments:

Blogger willow said...

Nice textures here, Phil. I like the repetitive "oo". I've shot a few clay pigeons in my day.

8/27/2010 9:25 AM  
Blogger ninotaziz said...

Oooohhhh!

8/27/2010 11:34 AM  
Blogger annell said...

Well chosen words with the image. Thanks

8/27/2010 2:28 PM  
Blogger Jinksy said...

Clever use words which suggest alternative images...

8/27/2010 5:35 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

I like the visuals in your few words - it starts a new train of thought - surely...

8/27/2010 7:36 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

brittle clay pigeons...that one stuck with me..i agree nice textures to your mag!

8/27/2010 11:40 PM  
Blogger kathew said...

well done. I like the imagery.

8/28/2010 12:56 PM  
Blogger Linda said...

Nice haiku. It fits the picture so well.

8/28/2010 8:46 PM  
Blogger Fireblossom said...

It's different, for sure. I like it!

Besides, anyone who has a picture of Buster Keaton and a quote from Groucho Marx on his sidebar, is all right with me. ;-)

"No matter who began it or commenced it...I'm against it!" --Groucho Marx

8/29/2010 4:18 PM  
Blogger Marilyn said...

clay pigeon and cast iron deer, I like it.

8/31/2010 3:47 AM  
Blogger Crystal Jigsaw said...

Particularly liking the clay pigeon being a farmer.

CJ xx

8/31/2010 6:55 AM  

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