Indian's summer
Such a beautiful fire.
Skenandoa raked the singular pile of leaves into the shape of a bulging fresh grave of her third husband, tending and prodding stubborn red leaves with a stick as if trying to awaken a dead dog, the brilliant crackling leaves never bellowing smoke to irritate the eyes, but her black magpie eyes burning with the somber tears of another Autumn's passing.
It was a beautiful fire, smelling of burnt maple syrup on vagabond shoe leather. I did not talk to her but pointed to the yellow leaves afire, ripe for the pickin', towering above the white covered bridge still making for a lovely shade. Skenandoa pointed over my right shoulder, and following her gaze, I turned. A little deer standing upon orange leaves at the edge of the bridge watched us.
'Awanita,' Skenandoa whispered affectionately. I held my breath. She clapped her hands, startling me in its musket-fire echo, and standing side by side now, we watched the deer silently sprinting back across the wooden planks, retreating light-footed onto close cropped bluegrass.
Skenandoa playfully jabbed me in the ribs with the ash stick to see if the white man was dead.
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16 Comments:
Raking leaves, piling them up, burning them ... all a part of autumn. I can c this scene so clearly.
That's really nice. So many colours in there, and very atmospheric. Like it
Geoff Moore
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glad you are still alive...smiles. i really dont want to rake leaves...
I really enjoyed the scene you painted with your words, Nice writing!
I especially like this line:
"beautiful fire, smelling of burnt maple syrup on vagabond shoe leather" what vision you have!
Black magpie eyes ... great Magpie!
Very nice! I can imagine myself in the midst of nature.
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a little freaky, but i like it loads. great short snap of imagery, really punchy.
Such colorful imagery... I could smell the smoke of the maple syrup on shoe leather. I could see the deer watching from the distance.
Nice magpie.
My Native American DNA is tingling and my Hoosier twang is twingling. :)
Loved all your wonderful images...like trying to wake a dead dog...etc...brillant write.....thank you...bkm
Strong piece full of intrigue and multi-layers - I love it.
This is such a wonderful piece of prose...from the first line to the last...i love it! :-)
..smelling of burnt maple syrup on vagabond shoe leather..what a sentence! enjoyed your imagery in here
It is wonderful. And I loved the imagery it evoqued. Thanks!
You are a true artist, painting your canvas in such vibrant colors....well told!!
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