the wall
Return my beloved
wall of deceit shall vanish
brick by moss caked brick
posted by phil at 7:02 PM
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
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13 Comments:
Wall of deceit makes me want to run away!!! Nice haiku
Perfect!
This is the most romantic haiku ever. You had me at moss.
Wonderfully expressed... nice take.
sharp,very sharp!
Nice and deep!
I like "moss cracked" rather than the more obvious "frost cracked"
This should cement any relationship.
Have a nice day, Boonie
Wall of deceit...it looks like that! Well chosen words!
Brick by moss caked brick! Class ending!
cool,
love your word choices.
Clever word play. I like it!
Hmm. Very...realizing, Philsy.
:^)
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Return shall I, to you, beloved
When all old walls doth due vanish
Either being brick and/or moss
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