Tuesday, February 1, 2011

the wall

Return my beloved
wall of deceit shall vanish
brick by moss caked brick

14 Comments:

Blogger Kristen Haskell said...

Wall of deceit makes me want to run away!!! Nice haiku

2/01/2011 7:57 PM  
Blogger Suko said...

Perfect!

2/01/2011 8:20 PM  
Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

This is the most romantic haiku ever. You had me at moss.

2/01/2011 10:44 PM  
Blogger Reflections said...

Wonderfully expressed... nice take.

2/02/2011 1:36 AM  
Blogger 120 Socks said...

sharp,very sharp!

2/02/2011 6:10 AM  
Blogger uma.a said...

Nice and deep!

2/02/2011 9:01 AM  
Blogger Doctor FTSE said...

I like "moss cracked" rather than the more obvious "frost cracked"

2/02/2011 9:47 AM  
Blogger Boonie S said...

This should cement any relationship.

Have a nice day, Boonie

2/02/2011 9:58 AM  
Blogger thingy said...

Nice!

2/02/2011 9:33 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Wall of deceit...it looks like that! Well chosen words!

2/02/2011 10:58 PM  
Blogger Lena said...

Brick by moss caked brick! Class ending!

2/04/2011 5:27 PM  
Blogger Jingle said...

cool,

love your word choices.

2/05/2011 8:30 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

Clever word play. I like it!

2/07/2011 10:18 AM  
Anonymous a Wryter said...

Hmm. Very...realizing, Philsy.

:^)

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Return shall I, to you, beloved

When all old walls doth due vanish

Either being brick and/or moss

2/07/2011 5:37 PM  

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