Tuesday, February 1, 2011

the wall

Return my beloved
wall of deceit shall vanish
brick by moss caked brick


Blogger Kristen Haskell said...

Wall of deceit makes me want to run away!!! Nice haiku

2/01/2011 7:57 PM  
Blogger Suko said...


2/01/2011 8:20 PM  
Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

This is the most romantic haiku ever. You had me at moss.

2/01/2011 10:44 PM  
Blogger Reflections said...

Wonderfully expressed... nice take.

2/02/2011 1:36 AM  
Blogger 120 Socks said...

sharp,very sharp!

2/02/2011 6:10 AM  
Blogger uma.a said...

Nice and deep!

2/02/2011 9:01 AM  
Blogger Doctor FTSE said...

I like "moss cracked" rather than the more obvious "frost cracked"

2/02/2011 9:47 AM  
Blogger Boonie S said...

This should cement any relationship.

Have a nice day, Boonie

2/02/2011 9:58 AM  
Blogger thingy said...


2/02/2011 9:33 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Wall of deceit...it looks like that! Well chosen words!

2/02/2011 10:58 PM  
Blogger Lena said...

Brick by moss caked brick! Class ending!

2/04/2011 5:27 PM  
Blogger Jingle said...


love your word choices.

2/05/2011 8:30 PM  
Blogger Mary said...

Clever word play. I like it!

2/07/2011 10:18 AM  
Anonymous a Wryter said...

Hmm. Very...realizing, Philsy.



Return shall I, to you, beloved

When all old walls doth due vanish

Either being brick and/or moss

2/07/2011 5:37 PM  

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