Friday, April 8, 2011

violet lament


Soft light, sharp focus
shadowed heart exit stage right
quiet on the set

As always, all 17 syllables thrown against the wall for 'recuerda mi corazon', exclusive home of haiku my heart.

posted by phil at 7:01 PM

4 Comments:

Blogger rebecca said...

each bright syllable
thrown against the wall of now
ready, aim, fire

4/08/2011 9:23 PM  
Blogger deb did it said...

damn. I love this haiku

4/08/2011 10:27 PM  
Blogger Margaret Pangert said...

Beautiful, Phil~ and a true "violet lament." This haiku is exquisite; ah... "exit stage right, quiet on the set." Language of the true poet...

4/08/2011 11:13 PM  
Blogger gatheringwonder said...

this carries a lovely tone

4/10/2011 7:28 PM  

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