Friday, February 11, 2011

heart haiku


shooting stars ablaze
love's two-step gazebo dance
Victrola splendor

9 Comments:

Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

I'll take a two-step over a waltz any day. Happy Valentine's Day! x

2/11/2011 10:59 PM  
Blogger Noelle Renee said...

Phil,
I love the references to the old movie numbers under the gazebo. They always bowled me over. Hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day.
Noelle

2/11/2011 11:37 PM  
Blogger rebecca said...

sometimes your haiku are
just filled with desire.

thanks for stirring mine.

2/12/2011 1:31 AM  
Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Wow, desires beckon,
Take two steps forward dear
Embrace joy, why not?

2/12/2011 3:00 AM  
Blogger Boonie S said...

Fascinating word usage. What’s Victrola?

All the best, Boonie

2/12/2011 3:39 AM  
Blogger Meri said...

Ah, the romance of gazebos. Weren't Liesl and Rolf (Sound of Music) in a gazebo when she sang "16 Going on 17" in the moonlight? Sigh..... And when I was young, my aunt had an old-fashioned Victrola. I think it had to be hand-cranked, as opposed to my parents' record players. And she had a bunch of 78 rpm records that came in paper sleeves and had sound full of scratchy static. No doubt she had the modern kind of music player too -- though I only remember the Victrola because it seemed so antique and exotic.

2/12/2011 12:11 PM  
OpenID pieceofpie said...

there is nothing as powerful as a tango with another.... may you tango the night away....

2/12/2011 3:16 PM  
Blogger Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

sweet and smart Haiku.

2/18/2011 9:54 AM  
Blogger Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

Greetings, how are you?
Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

Hope to see you in,

Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

Cheers.
xoxox

2/18/2011 9:54 AM  

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