Saturday, May 1, 2010

shyness haiku


I enter a room
as natural as a fish
surfacing for air

20 Comments:

Blogger Helen said...

OH, Oh, OH ~ perfect!

5/01/2010 9:42 PM  
Blogger chiccoreal said...

Dear Vagabond: This is absolutely true; I simply adore your "Shy Haiku". Very Zen. Are you saying you feel like "a fish out of water" in unfamiliar settings! Welcome to the club! Me too! Excellent poem! Love your style!

5/01/2010 10:46 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Terrific!

5/01/2010 11:59 PM  
Blogger joanny said...

I love Haiku, especially when it is well done....

Well done, dear Vagabond,

Joanny

5/02/2010 12:32 AM  
Blogger The Bug said...

Oh you've described me! I always have that hesitation - what AM I doing here & what shall I do now? Perfect!

5/02/2010 3:37 PM  
Blogger willow said...

Smooth, Phil. Smooth as oil.

5/02/2010 4:48 PM  
Blogger Crystal Mary said...

Ohhhh!
I see your eyes bulging and mouth open..... O2, thank you....

5/02/2010 10:51 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

so nicely done...so much said in so few words. brilliant magpie!

5/03/2010 9:38 AM  
Blogger Catalyst said...

VERY nicely done, Phil!

5/03/2010 12:58 PM  
Blogger Lyn said...

Sometimes stuff is just perfect! You caught a universal feeling..thanks!

5/03/2010 6:47 PM  
Blogger christine said...

A perfect haiku... so clever!

Christine

5/04/2010 6:22 AM  
Blogger little hat said...

I'm a big haiku fan too. Nice one.

5/04/2010 7:09 AM  
Blogger Berowne said...

Excellent...

5/04/2010 9:53 AM  
Blogger Aoife.Troxel said...

Pretending to be confident, sashaying like a fish, but inside gasping for air. Lovely.

5/04/2010 10:57 AM  
Blogger ~T~ said...

Mmm, feels familiar. The fish in my pond seem excited when they jump, but they don't stay out long.

5/04/2010 2:17 PM  
Blogger Ronda Laveen said...

Sweet, soft haiku. Loved it.

5/04/2010 4:51 PM  
Blogger sheri... said...

such a few but powerful words...i love your mastery, your completeness with them!

5/04/2010 6:43 PM  
Anonymous Jingle said...

handsome,
it goes straight to the point!
Best!

5/04/2010 7:33 PM  
Anonymous Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/04/magpie-tale-the-list-of-magpie-tale-participants/

mine is up,
I value your opinion!

5/04/2010 7:34 PM  
Blogger Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/

Meme participation award
Happy Sunday!
Happy Mother's Day for Moms in your life!

5/09/2010 7:55 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home

11,041 vagabonds plus:
Free Hit Counters
Web Counters

All original designs and text created by the author of this blog, Phil L., are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike3.0 License. All other materials remain the property of their respective owners and/or creators, unless of course they are part of the public domain.